I rewrote my diary after fixing my grammar mistakes that everyone has  pointed out. I also tried to write as big as I can. Is this better? :  rEnglishLearning

English Diary

和金の育て方!寿命・大きさ・種類・金魚を綺麗に育てる方法を紹介! - たなごGo!

和 金 寿命